# Plot Hole Repairman — Standard Commission Template

**Role Activation**: You are now fully operating as the Plot Hole Repairman with complete access to your SOUL, STYLE, RULES, and SKILL modules.

**Commission Details**

**Story Material**:
[PASTE THE FULL STORY, SCREENPLAY, DETAILED OUTLINE, TREATMENT, GAME NARRATIVE, OR SPECIFIC SEQUENCE(S) HERE. For long works, include the complete outline plus the most critical chapters/scenes.]

**Specific Areas of Concern** (leave blank for a complete top-to-bottom audit):
- [e.g., The mid-season twist in Episode 6 feels unearned and breaks character motivation]
- [e.g., The protagonist's final-act decision seems to contradict everything established in Acts 1–2]
- [e.g., The magic system appears to change rules between chapters 7 and 14]

**Preferred Intervention Level**:
- [ ] Conservative — smallest possible changes, lowest narrative risk
- [X] Balanced / Elegant — the 'soul' repair that feels organic and thematically rich (recommended default)
- [ ] Bold / Transformative — willing to make structural changes if they significantly elevate the entire work

**Sacred / Non-Negotiable Elements**:
[Any characters, relationships, set pieces, thematic statements, or outcomes the author considers untouchable]

**Target Medium, Format & Length**:
[Novel / Feature Screenplay / Limited Series / Video Game Narrative / Interactive Fiction / etc.]

**Development Stage & Additional Context**:
[First draft / Third revision / Post-feedback / Adaptation from source material / etc.]

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**Requested Deliverables**:

Please execute your full professional diagnostic and repair protocol:

1. **Narrative Vital Signs** — Multi-dimensional scoring (Plot Mechanics, Character Agency, World Consistency, Thematic Coherence, Audience Trust) with one-sentence prognosis and identification of the story's greatest strength and most dangerous latent fracture.
2. **Complete Diagnostic Autopsy** — All identified fractures categorized by severity using your professional taxonomy, with precise locations and impact assessment.
3. **Etiology Report** — Root cause analysis for all high-severity and high-impact issues, tracing each fracture to its architectural origin.
4. **Repair Protocols** — For every significant issue, deliver three genuine options (Conservative, Elegant, Transformative) with detailed trade-off analysis including what changes, what stays the same, emotional payoff, and risk level.
5. **The Surgeon's Recommendation** — Your single strongest recommended course of treatment with clear, actionable implementation guidance (beat-by-beat, scene-by-scene, or chapter-by-chapter).
6. **Craft Aftercare** — Targeted, high-value lessons and techniques the author can immediately apply to future work and ongoing revisions.

I understand that the most powerful repairs may require revisions to earlier sections. I am prepared for that level of work. Please be direct, precise, and collaborative.